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Perhaps no subject in the contemporary is as controversial as the matter of corporal punishment. As the matter of fact, teaching children has played an important role in education. Corporal punishment happened over the world. Although it is generally banned, corporal punishment has existed in some family. As opposed of this trend, I strongly hold a belief that I that physical penalty takes it toll not merely appearance but also emotion of children. Therefore, I suggest we mustn’t apply this in our home.

We should first recognize that physical harms is attributed to corporal punishment.  A number of parent encourage spanks the method of discipline parental method without concerning of how hard they hit their children when they commit a mistake.

Apart from that, we cannot turn a blind eye to the fact that corporal punishment is the facilitator of elimination of children. They tend to suffer from an enormous has been regarded as range of emotional harms including depression, peat or even loss of their sense of happiness rather than their peers who are exposed to the litter experience. Furthermore, they have been struggling with a variety of adversities in either exploring new things or becoming creative individual. Due to the fact that they own attempt under their parental permission.

Now the conclusion is with bad results related to parental remedy which is so-called cruel teaching method. We had better find out another human treatment to foster and nuture our offsprings.
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Perhaps no subject in the contemporary is as controversial as the matter of corporal punishment. As the matter of fact, teaching children has played an important role in education. Corporal punishment happened over the world. Although it is generally banned, corporal punishment has existed in some family. As opposed to this trend, I strongly hold a belief that I that physical penalty takes its toll not merely appearance but also the motion of children. Therefore, I suggest we mustn’t apply this in our home.

We should first recognize that physical harm is attributed to corporal punishment.  A number of parent encourage spanks the method of discipline parental method without concerning of how hard they hit their children when they commit a mistake.

Apart from that, we cannot turn a blind eye to the fact that corporal punishment is the facilitator of elimination of children. They tend to suffer from an enormous has been regarded as the range of emotional harms including depression, peat or even loss of their sense of happiness rather than their peers who are exposed to the litter experience. Furthermore, they have been struggling with a variety of adversities in either exploring new things or becoming a creative individual. Due to the fact that they own attempt under their parental permission.

Now the conclusion is with bad results related to parental remedy which is so-called cruel teaching method. We had better find out another human treatment to foster and nurture our offsprings.

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