Mọi người chữa giúp e các chủ đề sau với ạ

Question

Mọi người xem giúp em hai lá thư sau đây có đúng ngữ pháp chưa ạ. E xin cảm ơn!

Topic 1:

Dear Sam

We finally moved house last month and now life has changed.

Everything is a difference. My house is in Lam Dong province. It is a two-story building with 4 bedrooms. There is a small garden with rose, a variety of vegetables, like cabbage, chili, ginger, garlic, and some plants, like an orange tree, an apple tree.

It is a quiet and peaceful countryside. I can hear the birds singing and feel the fresh air, which I couldn’t have when I lived in my old flat. However, there are not markets, shops, and schools nearby.

I have not met many neighbors here but the people living next door are friendly and helpful.

We are happy here, please come around and see us someday. You are always welcome.

Love!

Hung

Topic 2:

Dear Sam

I get excited every time I write to you and tell you everything in my daily life. In this letter, I want to share my birthday party held last weekend.

I held a big party in my flower garden. About 30 people came to my party including friends, relatives, and some neighbors. The garden is beautifully decorated with balloons and ribbons.

During the party, we played some fun games that everyone looked very funny and cute. We danced to the music and sang excitedly together. At the end of the party, we all took a lot of photos to capture those sweet moments. It was the best party I've ever had in my life.

I hope that the next birthday you and I can enjoy my party together

Answer me soon!

Hung

Answer 1

Line7 there is=> there are
Held last weekend=> held on the last weekend
Held a big party=> hold a big party