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Question

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The line graph presents information about the amount of money which was spent on books in four different countries over the period of 10 years starting from 1995

  Looking at the provided chart, it is clearly obvious that a much larger number of Germans had paid for books in comparison with French, Italians and Austrians, and Germans experienced the fastest growth in this money spending

  In 1995, the amount of money which Germany citizens spent on books registered the highest out of four countries, standing at $81 millions. This figures for France, Italy and Austria were lower, at about $55 millions, $50 millions and $30 millions respectively. From 2001 to 2003, an opposite tendency could be observed in the amount of money allocated to books in Germany. While the amount of money spent on books in the three remaining countries tended to go up, specifically in Austria which soared up from $30 millions to $60 millions, that of Germany declined moderately. 

  By 2005,  the total amount of money paid for books in Germany reached a peak at nearly $100 millions, compared to more than $60 millions of French and Austrians and just over $50 millions of Italians

 

 

Answer 1

bài viết khá tốt, mạch lạc, nhưng cần có thêm những sự so sánh khác như gấp bao nhiêu lần, hơn bao nhiêu $ để cho bài viết thêm phong phú nhé