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Advantages and disadvantages of the internet

Nowadays, the society is getting develomental. Of course, Internet has become to be a part of our life. But as we know, everything has two sides: advantages and disadvantages.

We can not deny that Internet has many advantages.

Firstly, the Internet is huge information store. It's easy for us to find available information in Internet.You can find it by the most popular search engines, such as: google.com, bing.com, yahoo.com, etc. Moreover, you can share information with other people around the world.

Secondly, Internet connects many people all over the world. Stay up date with the latest news of the world on the Internet. Most of the newspapers of the world are also available on the Internet. It easier to stay in touch with your friends by chatting, e-mail messages, forum….

Another benefit is there are many services on internet. Such as online banking, job seeking, purchasing movies tickets and hotel reservations. Especially for entertainment, you can see movies, listen to music or play games with other people in any part of the world.

Online education is also popular on the internet. Many websites provide lectures, books and documents on different subjects or topics. You can also download these lectures into your own computer to learn many times and get a lot of knowledge.

Besides, there are also disadvantages. The physical distance among loved ones is increasing and the emotional connect between people are missing. We can live without food but not Internet. We feel helpless when Internet connection is down.

Another drawback is Internet is the most popular source of spreading viruses. These viruses can attack your privacy and get some information about you.

The next drawback is accuracy of information. Sometimes we don’t know if some information may be incorrect or not. Sometimes you may be confused.

Another problem is the waste of time. We always remain engaged with many online activities such as checking emails, chatting, online shopping, business-deals, etc. We don’t get time to rest.

In conclusion, there are many advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. We have the intellect to make smart choices. We should not allow internet to distract or disturb our mind. We should use it in a way that brings harmony in life.

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Nowadays, the society is getting developmental. Of course, Internet has become to be a part of our daily life. But as we know, everything always has two sides: advantages and disadvantages.
 
It is undeniable that Internet has many advantages for our modern life during Era 4.0
 
Firstly, the Internet is a huge information store. It's easy for us to search for available information on the Internet just at your fingertips.You can access it by the most popular search apps, such as google.com, bing.com, yahoo.com, etc... Moreover, you can share information with other people around the world as easy as pie. 
 
Secondly, the Internet connects with many people all over the world. Stay updated with the latest news of the world on the Internet. Most of the newspapers of the world are also available on the Internet, for instance, vnexpress, Dan Tri Online, New York Times, etc... It is much easier to stay in touch with your friends by chatting, e-mail messages, forum….
 
Another benefit is that there are many services on the Internet. Such as online banking, job seeking, purchasing movies tickets, hotel reservations, etc... . Especially for entertainment, you can watch movies, listen to music or play games with other people in any part of the world without difficulties.
 
Online education is also popular on the Internet. Many websites provide lectures, books and documents on different subjects or topics which is necessary for students, teachers, white-collar workers. You can also download these lectures into your own PC to learn as many times as possible and acquire quite a depth of knowledge.
 
Besides, there are also disadvantages. The physical distance among beloved ones is increasing and the emotional connections between people are missing. We can live without food, water or even air but we can not the Internet. We feel helpless when the Internet connection is crashed or disconnected.
 
Another drawback is the Internet is the most popular source of spreading viruses. These viruses can attack your privacy and hack information from you, they can not only destroy your computer but also have bad effects on all aspects of your life.
 
The next drawback is the accuracy of the sources of information. Sometimes we don’t know if some information may be correct or not, you may also be confused and it will lead to your failure.
 
Another problem is the time consumption. We always remain engaged with many online activities such as checking emails, chatting, online shopping, business-deals, etc. That's why we don't have enough time to rest or take a break.
 
In conclusion, there are many advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. We have the intellect to make smart choices, we should never allow the Internet to distract or disturb our mind. Finally, we should use it in a way that brings harmony in life.
 
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Nowadays, the society is getting develomental. Of course, Internet has become to be a part of our daily life. But as we know, everything has  two sides: advantages and disadvantages.

We can not deny that Internet has many advantages.

Firstly, the Internet is huge information store. It's easy for us to find available information in (on)  Internet ( the Internet).You can find it by the most popular search apps, such as google.com, bing.com, yahoo.com, etc. Moreover, you can share information with other people around the world.

Secondly, Internet ( the Internet) connects many people all over the world. Stay up date (update) with the latest news of the world on the Internet. Most of the newspapers of the world are also available on the Internet. It easier to stay in touch with your friends by chatting, e-mail messages, forum….

Another benefit is there are many services on internet (the internet). Such as online banking, job seeking, purchasing movies tickets and hotel reservations. Especially for entertainment, you can see movies, listen to music or play games with other people in any part of the world.

Online education is also popular on the internet. Many websites provide lectures, books and (, and) documents on different subjects or topics. You can also download these lectures into your own computer to learn many times and enrich knowledge.

Besides, there are also disadvantages. The physical distance among (between) loved ones is increasing and the emotional connect(connection) between people are missing. We can live without food but not Internet(the Internet). We feel helpless when Internet(the Internet) connection is down.

Another drawback is Internet is the most popular source of spreading viruses. These viruses can attack your privacy and get some information about you.

The next drawback is accuracy(accusation) of information. Sometimes we don’t know if some information may be incorrect or not. Sometimes you may be confused.

Another problem is the waste of time. We always remain engaged with(on) many online activities such as checking emails, chatting, online shopping, business-deals, etc. We don’t have time to rest.

In conclusion, there are many advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. We have the intellect to make smart choices. We should not allow internet(the internet) to distract or disturb our mind. We should use it in a way that brings harmony in life.

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