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Đề bài the chart show change in spending habits of people in UK between 1971 and 2001.
Over 10 percent of people in Uk spent habits on computers.

The percentage of people's expenses going out owning cars in UK was highest, at 43%

The percentages of people spending habits on computers and books were roughly similar, with 12% and 14% respectively.

The proportion of people in UK spending money on computers was significantly higher than that of people in UK spending money on eating at restaurants at 12% and 14% respectively.

Only 1 percent of people spent money on books.

Computers:

The proportion of people in UK spending money on computers increased substantially to 12% in 2001.

There was a significant increase of 10% in the proportion of people in UK spending money on computer in 2001

A significant increase of 10% was seen in the proportion of people in UK spending money on computers in 2001.

Restaurants:

The proportion of people in UK spending money on eating at restaurants rose substantially to 14% in 2001.

In UK, there was a significant rise of 7% in the proportion of people spending money on eating at restaurants in 2001.

In UK, a significant rise of 7% was seen in the proportion of people spending money on eating at restaurants in 2001.

Petrol:

The figure for people in UK spending money on petrol decreased slightly to 8% in 2001.

In UK,there was a slight decrease of 2% in the figure for people spending money on petrol in 2001.

A slight decrease of 2% was seen in the figure for people in UK spending money on petrol in 2001.

Cars:

In UK, the percentage of people's expenses going out owning cars increased rapidly to 43% in 2001.

In UK, there was a rapid increase of 21% in the percentage of people's expenses going out owning cars in 2001.

A rapid increase of 21% was seen in the percentage of people's expenses going out owning cars in 2001.

Food:

The proportion of people in UK spending habits on food reduced remarkably to 14% in 2001.

There was a downward trend of 30% in the proportion of people in UK spending habits on food in 2001.


A downward trend of 30% was seen in the proportion of people in UK spending habits on food in 2001.


Books:

The proportion of people in UK spending habits on books decreased considerably to 1% in 2001.


There was a considerable decrease of 5% in the proportion of people in UK spending habits on books in 2001.


A considerable decrease of 5% was seen in the proportion of people in UK spending habits on books in 2001.
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