ielts task 1 bar chart and table-complete 5-6.5 ielts

Question

 

The bar chart and table show how customers felt about the US airlines and four aspects of airline service.

Overall, clients were more satisfied with airline and this figure witness a stable rise over the span of 8 years. Moreover, airline travelers were most contented with politeness of staffs and least satisfied with seats.

Looking at the bar graph for more detail, customer dissatisfaction showed an downward trend from 32% to nearly a quarter whereas this figure for dissatisfaction increased slightly by 3 to 4%.

Regarding to the table, the proportion of customers satisfied with flight attendants’ service went up 2% from 1999 to 2000 and 2000 to 2007 and was highest at 92% at the ending point. 75% of visitors contented with schedules in 1999, this rate grew to 79% after one year and then followed a stability in the next 7 years. Only 47% of travelers felt the seats were comfortable in 2007 and this figure was not recorded in 1999 and 2000.

Answer 1

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