My family ( mình là beginner mong mọi người chữa giúp ạ )

Question

My family is a normal one with three members : my parents and me. We live in a small house in Ben Tre City. Both of my parents are farmers. Although they live in a house but everybody has a different character. My father is reserved and tough but he love me very much. Particulaly, he's so good at cooking than my mother. I enjoy his dishes. My mother is gentle and kind. She always solves every trouble in my family without arguing. I have an extremely close -knit relationship with my mom, so she's the one I share everything with her. And the last one is me. I am every native although I am girl. My dream is getting a good doctor and earning a lot of money. My family is my life although sometimes I disagree with my parents and argue with them.

Answer 1

 Although they live in a house but everybody has a different character : câu này sai này 

=> bỏ but đi 

he love=> he loves

he's so good at cooking than my mother

=> better at (xem lại cấu trúc so snahs hơn nhé=)))

I enjoy his dishes (k hiểu)

she's the one I share everything with her

=> bỏ her đi

I am every native although I am girl (????)

getting => becoming 

 bạn viết còn chưa rõ ý đâu vs lại ngữ pháp nữa cần học hỏi nhiều hơn nhé 

Cố lên

 

Answer 2

My family is a normal one with three members : my parents and me. We live in a small house in Ben Tre City. Both of my parents are farmers. Although they live in a house but everybody has a different character. My father is reserved and tough but he loves me very much. Particularly, he's so good at cooking than  my mother. I enjoy his dishes (?). My mother is gentle and kind. She always solves every trouble in my family without arguing. I have an extremely close -knit relationship with my mom, so she's the one I share everything with her ( cái này sai ngữ pháp nhé) . And the last one is me. I am every native although I am girl (?). My dream is getting a good doctor and earning a lot of money. My family is my life although sometimes I disagree with my parents and argue with them.

Một vài góp ý nhé : Bạn viết đang còn mắc lỗi nhiều chỗ, ngôn ngữ mình thấy vẫn còn hơi hướng văn nói. Chúc bạn học tốt