Advantages of study abroad, đây là bài mình tự viết để ôn thi THPT Quốc gia, mong mọi người giúp đỡ mình nhiệt tình nhé ^_^ [closed]

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Going abroad can be one of the most interesting experiences in our life. Personally, being away from home has many advantages. The following discussions are my reasons. To begin with, you can gain higher academic qualifications when studying oversea. Actually, a large number of universities such as Oxford, Cambridgem,, in UK provide professional  teachers who can help you solve all problems, of course, you will have more opportunities to find a well-paid job in the future. Secondly, it is worth pointing out that living abroad is a chance to improve your English skills, which not only let you communicate effectively but also help you understand the cultures and people in other countries. Finally, not mention to that being sent to foreign countries makes you more mature and independent. Because experiencing new things, including cultures and customs, will be beneficial to you study. To sump up, studying abroad is an occasion for  the young to prepare for their future.

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Going abroad can be one of the most interesting experiences in our life. Personally, being away from home has many advantages. The following discussions are my reasons. To begin with, you can gain higher academic qualifications when studying oversea. Actually, a large number of universities such as Oxford, Cambridgem,, in UK provide professional  teachers who can help you solve all problems, of course, you will have more opportunities to find a well-paid job in the future. Secondly, it is worth pointing out that living abroad is a chance to improve your English skills, which not only let you communicate effectively but also help you understand the cultures and people in other countries. Finally, not mention to that being sent to foreign countries makes you more mature and independent. Because experiencing new things, including cultures and customs, will be beneficial to you study. To sump up, studying abroad is an occasion for  the young to prepare for their future.

 

Actually, a large number of universities such as Oxford ->  Actually, many of universities such as Oxford

To sump up -> to sum up

in UK -> in the UK (trước UK hay US phải dùng "the" ^_^)

Cambridgem -> Cambridge

Mình cũng tự ôn thi đại học, có gì cùng chia sẻ kinh nghiệm nha bạn hihi

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ừ mình cám ơn bạn nhé, he he mấy cái viết sai chính tả là tại mình làm ẩu quá, còn chỗ kia mình nghĩ dùng a large number of hay hơn many, nếu dùng a large number of có sai ngữ pháp gì không bạn

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hihi ^^

"a large number of" thì mình không chắc lắm vì thấy nó hay đi với danh từ không đếm được, có lẽ dùng "many of" thì chắc chắn hơn