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Question

The chart indicates information on visitors to British Museum, Science Museum and Natural History Museum in summer, in England, in 2013.

Overall, visitors to three London Museums had a fall trend in August and a rise trend in September.

It is obvious that, in June, the number of people visited three museums the same relative. But in July, the difference was considerable. While British Museum soars to 750 thousand people, Science Museum and Natural History Museum were dropped to around 370 thousand. at after month, the common trend of three museums had a decrease or level off visitors. However, the number of visitors to British Museum was still 500 thousand while the other two museums were over 300 thousand.

In September, visitors increased around 150 thousand for three museums. Finally, the graph presented a big fluctuation about number of visitors to British Museum. On the other hand, a growth or decline in other two museums was each other similar.

 

Answer 1

The chart indicates information on visitors to British Museum, Science Museum and Natural History Museum in summer, in England, in 2013. -->The chart compares the number of visitors who visit tothree different  museums in England such as British Museum, Science Museum and Natural History Museum in summer, in 2013. 

Overall, visitors to three London Museums had a fall trend in August and a rise trend in September.

 ---> what stands oout from the graph is there was upward trend in the number of visitors of the three London museums n August, which became the most popular museum from being at last places.

 

It is obvious that, in June, the number of people visited three museums the same relative. But in July, the difference was considerable. While British Museum soars to 750 thousand people, Science Museum and Natural History Museum were dropped to around 370 thousand. at after month, the common trend of three museums had a decrease or level off visitors. However, the number of visitors to British Museum was still 500 thousand while the other two museums were over 300 thousand.

In September, visitors increased around 150 thousand for three museums. Finally, the graph presented a big fluctuation about number of visitors to British Museum. On the other hand, a growth or decline in other two museums was each other similar.

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