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Question

The chart presents percentage change in average house prices in five cities during 1990 to 2002 in comparison with 1989. At glance at the chart provide, the data in period from 1990 to 1995 decreased compare with 1989, while the next period trended growth.

    According to the period between 1990 and 1995, the number of change in average house prices plunged by 5% in New York and approximately 7.5% both London and Tokyo. Otherwise, Madrid (Spain) and Frankfurt ( Germany) rose about 2% and 3,5% respectively.

    As far as the next period (1996-2002) is concerned. Almost this number went up by 5% in New York, 4% in Madrid, 5% in Tokyo. London has the largest increase in the average house price. However, the only Frankfurt went down to about 1,5%.

     In conclusion, it can be said that there are an extra difference in house prices between five cities which illustrated in this graph.

Answer 1

The chart presents percentage of changing in average house prices in five cities between 1990 and 2002 in comparison with 1989. At glance at the chart provide, the data in period from 1990 to 1995 decreased compare with 1989, while the next period trended growth.

    According to the period between 1990 and 1995, the number of change in average house prices plunged by 5% in New York and approximately 7.5% both London and Tokyo. Otherwise, Madrid (Spain) and Frankfurt ( Germany) rose about 2% and 3,5% respectively.

    As far as the next period (1996-2002) is concerned. Almost this number went up by 5% in New York, 4% in Madrid, 5% in Tokyo. London has the highest increase in the average house price. However, the only Frankfurt went down to about 1,5%.

     In conclusion, it can be said that there are an extra difference in house prices between five cities which illustrated in this graph.

Answer 2

The chart presents percentage change in average house prices in five cities during 1990 to 2002 in comparison with 1989  => the chart presents the comparision of percentage change in average house prices in five city between 1989 to 2002.

Provide  => provided

According to the period between 1990 and 1995  =>   according to the information supplied between 1990 and 1995

the number of change in average house prices  => the average house price

approximately 7.5% both London and Tokyo  =>  approximately 7.5% in both London and Tokyo

Otherwise, Madrid (Spain) and Frankfurt ( Germany)  =>  Otherwise,the average house price in Madrid (Spain) and Frankfurt ( Germany)

As far as the next period (1996-2002) is concerned. => from 1996 to 2002

Almost this number went up by 5% in New York, 4% in Madrid, 5% in Tokyo. London has the largest increase in the average house price. However, the only Frankfurt went down to about 1,5%.     => the figure for New York, Madrid and Tokyo went up by 5%, 4% and 5% respectively, whereas the average house price in Frankurt declined by 1,5%. London is the city has the biggest increase in the average house price….

Answer 3

the number of change in average house prices plunged by 5% in New York and approximately 7.5% both London and Tokyo. Otherwise, Madrid (Spain) and Frankfurt ( Germany) rose about 2% and 3,5% respectively.the number of change in average house prices : the average house price

In conclusion, it can be said that there are an extra difference in house prices between five cities which illustrated in this graph.-> is