IELTS task 2 đề thi ngày 30/5/2015 - international tourism
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Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes

Tourism brings many economic and social benefits, particularly rural areas and developing countries. However, not of most people think that it is a good thing for their home country. In this essay, I will analysis explanations and suggest some measures for this problem.

Perhaps some of locals unwelcome tourist from oversea due to some possible negative impacts of tourism on their living and environment. Firstly, their houses and lands, where they have lived for a long time could be displaced for new constructions, such as hotels and restaurants in order to serving foreign travellers. Secondly, the inhabitants may have to share their water supply and heritage sites with the oversea visitors, this can lead to overuse their natural resources and cultural destination. Finally, tourism could cause increased of pollution through traffic emission and noise.

There are some potential ways to change the negative attitudes of the local residents. One possibility is that government should emphasise and publicise the benefits of tourism widely on media which help people to understand the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. Tourism does not only provide a considerable contribution to their economy but creates jobs for themselves and next generation. In addition, authorities and government need take actions to conserve and develop natural resources and cultural heritage by promotion from oversea tourist through their spending on visiting the historical attraction and using services. The local resident would be happy and encourage people from the rest of world to visit them if they know this helps them to maintain and promote their culture.

In conclusion, the possible adverse impacts of tourism cause negative of local people on oversea tourists. However, if government take actions to minimize the negative impacts and make inhabitant understand benefits of tourism are much greater than its drawback, the attitude could be changed.

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not of most people - sửa thành " None of people"

the inhabitants may have to share their water supply- Câu này sửa thành câu dự đoán không chắc chắn đúng với tình huống hơn " the inhabitants may had to share their water supply"

 Tourism does not only provide a considerable contribution to their economy but also creates jobs for themselves and next generation

Bạn nên " encourage" - động từ sửa lại thành  tính từ "encouraging" vì ở đây bạn sử dụng  từ nối "and" thì phải song song về mặt chức năng

The local resident would be happy and encourage people from the rest of world to visit them if they know this helps them to maintain and promote their culture.

 

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