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Topic của mình là:
"Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required." Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Mine:
Public health is one of the most important concern of each goverment. They therefore manage to implement projects that increase public awareness of fitness. One of them is to increase the number of sports facilities in public places such as equipments in parks and calling for public participation. Others, however, states that such activities would have little effect on public health and therefore other practical measures are required. Before any decision to be made, we shall discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of each option to the public health.
It is undoubted that modern sports facilities would be a great benefit for the public especially for those who have not tried before. Apart from health advantages, people would have a close connection to each other especially their neighbourhood when nowadays, there is a lack of interactive relationship among our community.
Ironic is that people may meet difficulty between their own priority concern and time management. After working-hours, they are rush to their after-work activities such as taking care of children, hanging out at clubs and today such activities like watching TVs or playing games is dominant their spare-time. As a result, they paid little attention to regular exercises.
In additions, personal trainer is reccommended for fitness because they are the ones who acquire knowledge and understand each certain human body's structure. Therefore, they may offer better advices than what we are searching from untrusted sources to improve health. It is, however, seldom found in public fitness centres while cost and expenses paid for them is huge.
So far, it is far from reality that increasing number of sport facilities would help improve public health without any other actions. Such activities like public yoga days or promoting campaigns of these equipments shall be needed to impress the audience or to encourage them paying attention to their health and proper exercises.
I personally think within a scope of that, people will soon enjoy their public training day and invite others to participate."
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