IELTS Task 1 Proportion of population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040

Question

The line graph demontrate the percentage of population aged of 65 and over in three nations including Japan, Sweden, USA from 1940 to 2040.

Overall, a ging population in three countries has witnessed an upward trend although ist figures has fuctuated in some period.

To be specific, the rate of aging population in Japan saw a light fall from 5% to 3% for the first tưenty years, followed by a stable trend for the next thirty years. Then, experiencing a strong growth to 10% in 2030, this nation keep growing up to the highest point of about 26% in 2040 according to prediction . In Sweden, the rate witness a steady rise from 6% to 14% in the first 60 years. After that, it’s experience a volatine trend for about 14% to 20% in the next 20 years, followed by a slowly to 17% in near 2030. However, it’s reach a peak at 25% in 2040. Turning to USA,witness an upward trend from 9% -15% in 1940 to 1980 and remain stable at 14% in the next 40 years, followed by hit a high of 23% in 2040.

A strkingky feature is that in 2040 all nations reach the highest point in the rate of aging population according to prediction.

Answer 1

The line graph gives information about demontrate the percentages of the population aged of 65 and over in three different nations including Japan, Sweden, USA from 1940 to 2040.

Introduction này không khác đề bài gốc mấy, nên mới gợi ý là dùng cụm elderly people thay vào.

Overall, a ging population in three countries has witnessed there was an upward trend in ... in all countries. although ist figures has fuctuated in some period.

Overview chưa ổn vì bạn không nói đến nửa giai đoạn còn lại (phải dùng Future Tense).