A best friend

Question

My friend's name is Trang. We have been best friend since our childhood. We grow up together and have been studying in the same school untill now. We are 16 years old. She is a beautiful and nice girl. She's tall and thin. Her face is oval and it go well with her long black hair. Her daily clothes are T-shirts anf jeans. I like her simple style. We become friends due to the same interest, a lot of things in common. She is humorous, friendly and understanding. She tries to see me when I go through traumatic life event and learn to forgive. Amoung us have the mutual trust which is the most important quality that keeps our good friendship. She never tell the others my secrets and So do I. I find her to be my best friend forever and I'll try my best to keep this relationship last beautiful.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

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