Bài IELTS task 1: The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions.

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The graph illustrates the changes in proportion of visitors to Scotland who went to four different destinations between 1980 and 2010.

Overall, it is clear that the percentage of visitors to the Castle and Zoo increased, while the figures for the Aquarium and Festival decreased over the period. In addition, the proportion visiting the Castle was by far the most popular of four destinations.

It can be seen that the Zoo was the least commonly chosen attraction, with only 10% of visitors in 1980. After some fluctuations, this figure increased gradually to 20% in 2010. By contrast, the Festival was the most favoured place for visitors to Scotland. Starting with 30% in 1980, but then this percentage saw a steady decline, reaching a final figure of just under 20% in 2010.

In 1980, the figure for travellers to Aquarium was 20%. There was a rapid growth to a peak of 35% in 1985 before decreasing sharply to less than 10% in 2010. The percentage visiting the Castle also increased significantly in over the period of 15 years. It roses from 22% in 1980 to reach a peak of 45% in 1995. However, this figure then declined, to below 35% in the end of period.

 

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The graph illustrates the changes in the proportion of visitors to Scotland who went to four different destinations between 1980 and 2010.

Overall, it is clear that the percentage of visitors to the Castle and Zoo increased, while the figures for the Aquarium and Festival decreased over the period. In addition, the proportion visiting the Castle was by far the most popular of four destinations.

It can be seen that the Zoo was the least commonly chosen attraction, with only 10% of visitors in 1980. After some fluctuations, this figure increased gradually to 20% in 2010. By contrast, the Festival was the most favored place for visitors to Scotland. Starting with 30% in 1980, but then this percentage saw a steady decline, reaching a final figure of just under 20% in 2010.

In 1980, the figure for travelers to Aquarium was 20%. There was a rapid growth to a peak of 35% in 1985 before decreasing sharply to less than 10% in 2010. The percentage visiting the Castle also increased significantly in over a period of 15 years. It roses from 22% in 1980 to reach a peak of 45% in 1995. However, this figure then declined, to below 35% at the end of the period.

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