The line graph below shows the percentage of tourist to Scotland who visited four different attraction in Edinburgh

Question

The line graph below give information about the proportion of tourist to four different destination in Edinburgh (  region of Scotland) in the period 30 years.

 It is clear from graph that the rate of visitor came to Castle and Zoo tend to increase over the period of 1980 to 2010. While the opposite was right for Festival and Aquarium. Moreover, the percentage of Caslte was the the most popular of 4 attraction by far.


In 1980, percentage of tourist visit Castle and Zoo around 24%, then dramatically increased and peak at 46% in 1995. After that it gradually go down at 31% in 2010. The rate of Zoo also had a same trend. It is gradually rise double  from 10% in 1980 to exactly 20% in 2010.

In the other hand, proportion of people go to Festival was approximately 30% in 1980 steadily decreased to 25% in 1995 and remained unchanged the rest of given period. At the same time, figure for Aquarium underwent a fluctuation. It started at 20% in 1980, then reach its peak at 1985 and follow a downward trend, drop at 8% in 2010.

Answer 1

The line graph below (dont use it because dont have any graph in ur essay ) give(gives) information about the proportion of tourist to four different destination(destinations) in Edinburgh (  region of Scotland) in(over) the period 30 years.

 It is clear from graph that the rate of visitor came to Castle and Zoo tend(past) to increase over the period of(from) 1980 to 2010. While the opposite was right for Festival and Aquarium. Moreover, the percentage of Caslte was the the most popular of 4 attraction by far.


In 1980, percentage of tourist visit Castle and Zoo(are) around 24%, then dramatically increased and peak(peaked) at 46% in 1995. After that it gradually go(went) down at 31% in 2010. The rate of Zoo also had a same trend. It is gradually rise(rose) double  from 10% in 1980 to exactly 20% in 2010.

In the other hand, proportion of people go(going) to Festival was approximately 30% in 1980(and) steadily decreased to 25% in 1995 and(then) remained unchanged at the rest of given period. At the same time, figure for Aquarium underwent a fluctuation. It started at 20% in 1980, then reach(reached) its peak at 1985 and follow(followed) a downward trend, drop(droped) at 8% in 2010.