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Question

Mọi người giúp e với. E mới học nên cũng k biết đúng sai chỗ nào và cho e hỏi với bài này thì được tầm mấy chấm ạ. E cảm ơn

The line graph compares data on the rates of car theft in different countries over the period of 8 years.

 

Overall, the number of car theft in Great Britain was highest, while the number of car theft in Canada was lowest 

From 1990 to 1996 there was a constant flactuation in the number of car theft between 16.5 and 19.7 thefts and reached a peak of some 19.7 thefts. Cars which was stolen in Canada decreased gradually from 7 to 5 thefts between 1990 and 1993 and remained almost stable for the rest of the period. The figure for car theft in France declined significantly from 1990 to 1993 and hit a low of some 6.2 thefts and stayed relatively unchanged during the last 5 years. The period from 1990 to 1998 in Sweden saw a continoust increase
in the number of car theft

 

Answer 1

The line graph compares data on the rates of car thefts in different countries over the period of 8 years.

 

Overall, the number of car thefts in Great Britain was highest, while the number of car thefts in Canada was lowest 

 

From 1990 to 1996, there was a constant fluctuation in the number of car theft between 16.5 and 19.7 thefts and reached a peak of some 19.7 thefts. Cars which were stolen in Canada decreased gradually from 7 to 5 thefts(nếu chủ ngữ là "cars got stolen" thì đơn vị ở đây cũng phải là "cars" chứ nhỉ? between 1990 and 1993 and remained mostly stable for the rest of the period. The figure for car theft in France declined significantly from 1990 to 1993 and hit a low of some 6.2 thefts and stayed relatively unchanged during the last 5 years. The period from 1990 to 1998 in Sweden saw a continoust increase
in the number of car thefts

Theo mình đi học thì các thầy/cô nói là cấu trúc bài task 1 cần có 4 đoạn (Intro, Overview, Body 1, Body 2) 

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PS: mình cũng đang tập viết nên có gì ta cùng trao đổi nhé. 

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Answer 2

1.the number of + (singular) N

2.From 1990 to 1996 there was a constant flactuation in the number of car theft between 16.5 and 19.7 thefts and reached a peak of some 19.7 thefts

Answer 3

The line graph compares data on the rates of car theft in different countries over the period of 8 years.

 

Answer 4

The figure for car theft in France declined significantly from 1990 to 1993 and hit a low of some 6.2 thefts and stayed relatively unchanged during the last 5 years.