It is argued that playing sports in team such as brings many benefits for players, while others think that people should choose to play individuals sports rather team sports. In my opinion, I would argue that each type of sports both bring certain benefits, people should opt the one they are keen on.
On the one hand, playing team sports is beneficial for players for some reasons. Firstly, it helps to boost player’s mental health. When people work in a team, it means they have to interact with each other, such as having meals, communicating together. This enables them to socialize better, which make players feel they are not lonely. For example, after winning a game, team players usually throw a party to celebrate, and this is an opportunities for them to share everything in life and have fun with each other. Secondly, team sports is highly advantegeous to players’ career. When they play in a team, they may work with other people in other jobs, so these people can help each other. For example, if a person works as a businessman or businesswoman, he or she can sign some possible contracts earned from playing team sports.
On the other hand, we cannot deny the benefits of playing sports individually. The first advantage is that players prefer this kind of sport, and they get a lot of enjoyment when they are involved in the sport. For example, I am very keen on gym, so I go to the gym every morning to relax and gain the energy for my work. The second benefit of playing individual sport is for the feeling of freedom in stead of depending on others. Players can manage their time to play without worrying about being late or making their teammates wait in team sport.
In conclusion, playing individual or team sport both bring benefits for players. It depends on the preferences and the purpuses of people when they choose a sport to play.
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