Describing people

Question

My father is my role model and my inspiration on life. He’s tall, slim and especially he has a sparkling brown eyes. He’s middle-age, but he looks very young for his age. He still does lots of exercise and is quite well-built. In addition, my father is happy person and always smile thus everyone consider him a friendly person. He’s also got a good sense of humour and seems to get on well with everybody. Besides, he is hard-working, patient and understanding. He always give me valuable advice and is willing to stand by me through all the ups and downs of my life. Although he is busy with work, he makes sure to take time out to take us on outings to interesting places. He teachs me the values of not giving up and to follow my dreams no matter what happens. I am really appreaciate father’s effort, commitment to conserve the family’s happiness. I love my father and admire him for his many good qualities. My father is an indispensable part of my life.

Answer 1

My father is my role model and my inspiration on life. He’s tall, slim and especially he has a sparkling (sparkling) brown eyes. He’s middle-age He is middle-aged, but he looks very young for his age. (He still does lots of exercise and is quite well-built). In addition, my father is a happy person and always smile thus so everyone consider him a friendly person. He’s also got a good sense of humour and seems to get on well with everybody. Besides, he is very hard-working, patient and understanding. He always give me valuable advice and is willing to stand by me through all the ups and downs of my life. Although he is busy with work, he makes sure to take time out to take us on outings to interesting places. He teachs me the values of not giving up and follow to my dreams no matter what happens. I am really appreaciate father’s effort, commitment to conserve the family’s happiness. I love my father and admire him for his many good qualities. My father is an indispensable part of my life.

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