Anh chị có thể sửa giúp e 2 bài writing task 2 này không ạ? Do you agree or disagree?
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1/ It is argued that business is playing an ever increasing  role in many aspect of social and it is not only making a profit but also having social obligation. I completely agree with the idea that business should do more for society than simply earning profit.

On the one hand, business can contribute to social more simply concentrate on making profit. Firstly, business may be able to create more job opportunities and decrease unemployment rate. Secondly, companies or organizations pay tax to donate to national budget. A prime example is Mark Zuckerberg who is CEO of Facebook, he and his wife establish a fund and contribute a large amount of profit of company to a Health Care Department for curing disease.

On the other hand, apart from making money corporations also need to have social obligation. As can be seen that organizations expanding their business as well as expand of funding and donating more for social community. Besides earning profit for corporations’ business, they can be well – known throughout social activities in order to acquire more and more financial for supporting the society. For instance, Amazon company which creates a fund to preserve environment and other organizations establish a fund to protect disabled children.

In conclusion, I believed that business always have a specific purpose however it seems to me that they should not ignore their social responsibility.

 

2/It is argued that wild animals have lived on the Earth longer than human and we also invade their place that is cause of their extinction. However, some people believed that protecting and preserving them is waste of time, budget and so on. I completely disagree with the idea simply because animals help to keep balance ecology environment and bring us to many benefits.

On the one hand, there is a plenty of room for human and wild animals to side by side if we do not take all their house to serve our demand and push them to facing the ongoing a race of extinction. As we know that human have cut a large amount of trees down annually to build roads which is widely a house of variety of wild animals or consolidate lakes and rivers to build houses and farms. A prime example is black rhinos, if we did not hunt them to collect and sale their horns, these beautiful animals could be still exist not.

On the other hand, not only is waste of resource preservation of wild animals but also it bring to us many benefits. Besides, human have to establish organizations to protect the habitants of wild animals simply because conserving animals in another words is protecting our planet and our lives. For instance, it is widely known that many medicines are derived from chemicals produced by some wild animals. Furthermore, instead of build more zoo or circus to block wild animals up and serve our entertainment, we should release and let them grow up exactly in a natural way such as national park or wild life mainly because they can be maintain of balance ecosystem.

In conclusion, protecting wild animals is human obligation and if we do not know the benefit that wild animals bring to us today, we could not get any further greater things from them in one day.  

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Bài 1 ạ. theo ý kiến của mình thì thế này:

A prime example is Mark Zuckerberg who is CEO of Facebook, he and his wife-> A prime example is MZ, the CEO of Facebook, who joined his wife for establishing....and contributing ( việc thành lập là ở quá khứ nhé)

Sau apart from making money có dấu phẩy ạ

I believed-> I believe

câu cuối bài 1:However phải đc dùng với chấm hoặc phẩy.  bạn có thể chuyển luôn sang câu mới cũng dc

 

bài 2: instead of build-> building

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