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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

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Nowadays, consumers are more likely to make a food products from foreign countries choice than domestic ones. While there are various reasons for this trend, some initiatives could be taken to increase buyer’s demand for local food.

There are two mains reasons, in my opinion, why an increasing number of people tend to purchasing food imports. Firstly, the development of international trade has become easier for purchasers to access to foreign food products. As a result, they can choose between several products and find the one they like the most. Secondly, consumers would prefer purchasing food imports because of their quality. When foods are being imported, their quality is always checked and only the best products end up on the globe market so this would help the buyers could believe in quality of imported food. In Vietnam, for example, importing agricultural products must undergo testing and also include expiration dates, and food safety standards.

The government should take some measures to boosting the consumption of domestic commodities effectively. The first solution is that government could impose a higher tax on the importation to reduce the demand. By raising tax, people’s pockets are affected directly, thus they would increase their desire for more indigenous food. On an individual level, food manufacturing companies should assure their consumption of food that is higher for fresh, natural and organic products. In other words, if a supplier tried to sell healthier food, people would show more willingness to increase their spending on the local foods.

In conclusion, the causes for consumers’ change of preference for food are varied; and government and producers could do a lot to promote them to buy local products.

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Nowadays, consumers are more likely to make a food products from foreign countries choice than domestic ones. While there are various reasons for this trend, some initiatives could be taken to increase buyer’s demand for local food.	Nowadays, consumers are more likely to choose food products from foreign countries rather than domestic ones. While there are various reasons for this trend, some initiatives could be taken to increase buyers’ demand for local food.
There are two mains reasons, in my opinion, why an increasing number of people tend to purchasing food imports. Firstly, the development of international trade has become easier for purchasers to access to foreign food products. As a result, they can choose between several products and find the one they like the most. Secondly, consumers would prefer purchasing food imports because of their quality. When foods are being imported, their quality is always checked and only the best products end up on the globe market so this would help the buyers could believe in quality of imported food. In Vietnam, for example, importing agricultural products must undergo testing and also include expiration dates, and food safety standards.	There are two mains reasons, in my opinion, why an increasing number of people tend to purchase food imports. Firstly, the development of international trade has made it easier for purchasers to access to foreign food products. As a result, they can choose between several products and find the one they like the most. Secondly, consumers would prefer purchasing food imports because of their quality. In order to be imported, food is always checked for its quality and only the best products will end up on the globe market, so this would help the buyers could believe in the quality of imported food. In Vietnam, for example, imported agricultural products must follow food safety standards, undergo testing and the packaging must also show  expiration dates.
The government should take some measures to boosting the consumption of domestic commodities effectively. The first solution is that government could impose a higher tax on the importation to reduce the demand. By raising tax, people’s pockets are affected directly, thus they would increase their desire for more indigenous food. On an individual level, food manufacturing companies should assure their consumption of food that is higher for fresh, natural and organic products. In other words, if a supplier tried to sell healthier food, people would show more willingness to increase their spending on the local foods.	The government should take some measures to effectively boosting the consumption of domestic commodities. The first solution is that government could impose a higher import tax on the importation to reduce the demand. By raising tax, government can directly affect people’s pockets are affected directly, thus they would increase their desire for cheaper local indigenous food. On an individual level, food manufacturing companies should ensure their consumption of food that is products are more fresh, natural and may be organic as well. In other words, if a supplier tries to sell healthier food, people will show more willingness to increase their spending on the local foods.
In conclusion, the causes for consumers’ change of preference for food are varied; and government and producers could do a lot to promote them to buy local products.	In conclusion, the causes for consumers’ changed of preference for food are varied; and government and producers could do a lot to promote them to buy local products.