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In some countries，university students live in home, whereas in other countries university students go to other cities and do not live with family. Do you think the advantages for living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?
Todays, students tend to leave their hometown for going to far-off universities,while others still choose some colleges near their home. Far away their family, it does mean that they have to experience a new life without their parents’ care. In my point of view, there are some positive things ,which are likely to dominate nagative things regarding to far-home study.
It is of great importance for university students to come to other places for further studies, which may help to dramatically improve their all-rounded developments. Going to universities far away their home is considered a way to broad their knowledge. Students, like fishes out of water, may learn new things, meeting new people, having access to new studying environment, which they may get more enormous experiences from those that offer the great preparation for their future.
It is not deniable that it remains a small numbers of cons for students to study in universites in other provinces or cities. They have to care themselves in all things without any support of their family. For example, when they get illness or diseases , caring themselves with treatments is all things they need to focus on. However, This seems to strengthen their independence which they may have to be active, self-reliant, decidable in their life, making a large contributiton to shape their brighter future.
In conclusion, Though there are both advantages and disadvantages of studying in far-away universities or colleges, as far as I think, the pros is more than the cons.
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