We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only ve concerned with our own communities ad countries

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In recent year, by far, in modern lifestyle, human becomes skeptical. They who think helping people is useless point, only take care themselves and their countries.I am complete disagree it.

On the one hand, I complete disagree it that in some case we cannot help everyone when they need help. To help a person in the world pass the difficulties was very hard. Some problem which people have survive cannot solve such as cancer, tsunami, bankrupt. It is hard for other people to help they enthusiastically expect their family member. For example, in 2014, Japan, which was an industrialised country, must survive the disaster from a tsunami. It was tough for everybody in the world help Japna restore.

Nevertheless, despite the difficulty in helping someone, you cannot be conscienceless to them. In my opinion, among people must have a close connection and consideration, which will make them can pass difficulty in some situation. In addition, you will have a good life when you improve your manner and help people who need helps. You cannot assist them because of above reason, but they need your consideration. For example, in 2015 the number of French died in bombard when IS attack France was 21 people who made their people live France become worried. Fortunately, consideration from people in everywhere made citizens in France which continue life and against IS

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In recent year, by far, in modern lifestyle, human becomes skeptical. People who think that helping people is useless , only turn into consideration about themselves and their countries. In my view of point, I completely disagree 

     Helping a person in the world passing the difficulties is extremely thorny and intricated because there are some problems that people can't handle such as cancer, nature disaster or bankrupt. Therefore, It turn out to be useless to help. For example, in 2014, Japan, which was an industrialised country, must suffer from a disastrous tsunami. It was tough for everybody in the world helping Japan restore.

Nevertheless, despite the difficulty in helping someone, you cannot ignore and relinquish effort to condole and help them. Futhermore,  are there a close connection and consideration among people, which will encourage them to overcome the risk in some situation. In addition, you will have a good life when you improve your manner and help people who need your help. Although in some circumstances, you feel hopeless and useless even you want to encourage them but they always need your consideration. For example, in 2015 the number of French died in bombard when IS attacked France was 21 people and it posed a threat and worry for French. Fortunately, consideration from people in everywhere made citizens in France  continue life and be against IS

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