We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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There is an opinion that to assist all needy people around the world is quite unreachable so the best way is to only focus on matters of  each one’s nations.To some extent, I agree that we should pay more attention to our own communities first but giving aid to other international friends is not quite impractical at all.

Firstly, there are some reasons for the need to give priorities to find solutions to our own countries.Generally, it is our basic resposibility.Each person has their own and only native land, it is the place where we was born, brought up snd frow up.Besides, we receive love, care and assistance from the people around us, called communities.Without these factors, it can be said that we can’t get mature and profound changes.Therefore, it is our certain responsibility to spend a special concern for our country first , this can be called gratefulness and fulfiling our filial duty.Moreover, when troubles come up, they will directly and rapidly affect the life of our family, realtives, neighbors ans us.If we don’t rush to propose some appropriate solutions, the consequence will be totally terrible.Last but not least, being concerned with our own communities first is definitely the only way to deal with bigger international, we need to seek for solutions to the smallest first then it must be easier for us to solve the bigger and bigger ones.For example, if we are not able to create policies to eradicate poverty in Vietnam first, it will be pretty sure out of our reach to assist the residents in poor African countries.

Secondly, although our own communities and countries should be put in priority, we also need to assist our international friends, which is not impractical at all.It is totally agreed that we are unable to help everyone over the world by the way we do with our countries, however, it is easier and more simple of we know the right and effective ways.Some can be listed as: raising funds including: money, clothes, books,…to give aid to needy residents in poor or disaster-influenced countries, hold demonstration to show our proposing attitude to bad phenomenons happening in the world,..Thus, helping international countries is hard but not entirely out of our reach.As a result, when our country has to face up with difficulties, we can be assisted by the friends who has received our help, this is called” give-and-take”.

In brief, being concerned with our own countries first is very important but to help others is necessary, too.We must do our best to assist others, not just concentrating on ours, because helping others is absolutely helping us, let’s give now and we can take in the future.
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There is an opinion that to assist all needy people around the world is quite unreachable so the best way is to only focus on matters of  each one’s nations (individual nation hoặc focus on matters of national individual).To some extent, I agree that we should pay more attention to our own communities first but giving aid to other international friends is not quite impractical at all.

Firstly, there are some reasons for the need to give priorities to find solutions to our own countries (why our country’s matter should take priority over others’).Generally, it is our basic resposibility (sai chính tả).Each person has their own and only native land, it is the place where we was born, brought up snd frow up (?).Besides, we receive love, care and assistance from the people around us, called communities.Without these factors, it can be said that we can’t get mature and profound changes (undergo profound changes and get mature).Therefore, it is our certain responsibility to spend a special concern (show/ express a considerable concern) for our country first , this can be called gratefulness and fulfiling our filial duty (patriotic duty).Moreover, when troubles come up, they will directly and rapidly affect the life of our family, realtives, neighbors ans us.If we don’t rush to propose some appropriate solutions, the consequence will be totally terrible.Last but not least, being concerned with our own communities first is definitely the only way to deal with bigger international, we need to seek for solutions to the smallest first then it must be easier for us to solve the bigger and bigger ones (ones là đại diện cho cái gì).For example, if we are not able to create policies to eradicate poverty in Vietnam first, it will be pretty sure to be/ surely out of our reach to assist the residents in poor African countries.

Secondly, although our own communities and countries should be put in priority, we also need to assist our international friends, which is not impractical at all.It is totally agreed that we are unable to help everyone over the world by the way we do with our countries, however, it is easier and more simple of we know the right and effective ways.Some can be listed as: raising funds including: money, clothes, books,…to give aid to needy residents in poor or disaster-influenced countries, hold demonstration to show our proposing attitude to bad phenomenons happening in the world,..Thus, helping international countries is hard but not entirely out of our reach.As a result, when our country has to face up with difficulties, we can be assisted by the friends who has (have) received our help, this is called” give-and-take”.

In brief, being concerned with our own countries first is very important but to help others is necessary, too.We must do our best to assist others, not just concentrating on ours, because helping others is absolutely helping us, let’s give now and we can take in the future.

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