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Question

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

      The chart illustrates comparison of the whole amount of time in telephone calls by 3 different groups in the UK   between 1996 and 2002.

     At first glance, it is clear that local-fixed line accounted for the largest number of time call compared to the rest of the categories. In addition, the two domestic and international-fixed line and mobiles types had a similarly upward trend over a period shown.

    In 1995, over 70 billion minutes of time call was in range as local-fixed line, still increased considerably and its peak quanity by 1999 with 90 billion minutes. From this year onwards, it started falling down and remained the same amount at the end of the period.

    Looking at the two other groups, national and international- fixed line had under 40 billion minutes of telephone calls in 1995, and this figure continued growing up gradually by 2002. Mobile, another call type, showed a dramatic rise at around 45 billion minutes in 2002 after its bottom amount in 1995. 

Answer 1

- Mình nghĩ chỗ the largest number of time call bạn cần thay number thành amount, hơn nữa bài này yêu cầu compare nhg bạn lại chưa chỉ đc mối liên hệ trong tưng thời kì, Đây là bài của thầy simon nếu cần thì bạn tham khảo nha 

The bar chart compares the amount of time spent by people in the UK on three different types of phone call between 1995 and 2002.

It is clear that calls made via local, fixed lines were the most popular type, in terms of overall usage, throughout the period shown. The lowest figures on the chart are for mobile calls, but this category also saw the most dramatic increase in user minutes.

In 1995, people in the UK used fixed lines for a total of just over 70 billion minutes for local calls, and about half of that amount of time for national or international calls. By contrast, mobile phones were only used for around 4 billion minutes. Over the following four years, the figures for all three types of phone call increased steadily.

By 1999, the amount of time spent on local calls using landlines had reached a peak at 90 billion minutes. Subsequently, the figure for this category fell, but the rise in the other two types of phone call continued. In 2002, the number of minutes of national / international landline calls passed 60 billion, while the figure for mobiles rose to around 45 billion minutes.

 

(197 words, band 9)

Answer 2

   The chart illustrates comparison of the whole amount of time in telephone calls by 3 different groups in the UK   between 1996 and 2002. ( bạn nên có một cái nhận xét chung, có thể ở phần introduction or conclusion , kieu overall trend y)

     At first glance, it is clear that local-fixed line accounted for the largest number of time called compared to the rest of the categories. In addition, the two domestic and international-fixed line and mobiles types had a similarly upward trend over a period shown. ( local fixed line ko phải là upward trend nhé, bạn nhìn lại graph  )

    In 1995, over 70 billion minutes of time call was in range as local-fixed line, still increased considerably and its reached its peak quanity by  in 1999 with 90 billion minutes. From this year onwards, it started falling down and remained the same amount at the end of the period.

    Looking at the two other groups, national and international- fixed line had under 40 billion minutes of telephone calls in 1995, and this figure continued growing up gradually by 2002 ( bạn xem lại trend của local -fixed line nhé, tư nam 1990 la decresed mà ). Mobile, another call type, showed a dramatic rise at around 45 billion minutes in 2002 after its bottom amount in 1995. 

Bài của bạn phân tích chưa có sự so sánh nhiều giữa các lines 

Answer 3

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A glance at the bar chart provided compares the sum of minutes in 3 different phone calls in the United Kingdom during the period from 1995 to 2002. Overall, it can be seen clearly from the given information that both National and International-fixed line and Moblies saw considerable increase. Besides, there was a dramatical fluctuation for the local-fixed line throughout the period.

In the year of 1990, provincial call was by far the most popular of those call types, which stood at about 72 minute billions. Over the next 4 years, the figure for this phone call reached a peak of nearly 90 minute billions. After that, the use of local phone call fell significantly from 1999 to 2002.

At the same time in 1995, National and International call was used in the medium level, acounted for about 37 minute billions. During this 4 years period, the use of general and outer call of the British people went up gradually, approximately 4 minute billions for each year. This figure continously climbed for the next 3 years, at about 61 minute billions in 2002.

In 1995, the sum of minutes ( in billions ) for moblies was the lowest figure, with just under 3 minute billions. After 4 years, the use of moblie phone calls increased moderately, reaching just under 7 minute billions. However, there was a sudden jumb in the using of mobiles in 2000 and 2001 ( around 23 and 39 minute billions respectively ).

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