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I have just read a book named " toi la mot con lua- Nguyen Phuong Mai", a famous pen in Ha Noi. The book attracts me not only the young writing style but the intension. It is about the writer's jouney though 23 countries. During the jouney, she shares majestic beauty of landscape and explains the original culture of those nations. When Mai came to Iguazu waterfall in Brazil, she expressed her exciting and satisfied with the most beauty of majestic waterfall in the world. She calls herself a donkey, so she is able to go anywhere in the world and enjoy those different cultures. In  South Africa, she helped the people here as a volunteer, but she soon left this job because of the uncooperative and irresponsible local teachers, parents and the people here. These teachers went out of classes to relax when she and her team came to help, many of the parents who are imcapable of feeding their children, left their infants in "baby recure" - a post which infants are put in and the citizen waited patently for aid as it was obvious. In the writer's point of view, domination causes poverty and strongly agrees that the developed countries should not aid for South Africa anymore. She explains that South Africa would die then, but he will stand on his feet to become a developing nation finally.

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I have just read a book named " toi la mot con lua- Nguyen Phuong Mai", a famous pen in Ha Noi. The book attracts me not only the young writing style but the intension. It is about the writer's journey though 23 countries. During the journey, she shares majestic beauty of the landscape and explains the original culture of those nations. When Mai came to Iguazu waterfall in Brazil, she expressed her exciting and satisfied with the most beauty of the majestic waterfall in the world. She calls herself a donkey, so she is able to go anywhere in the world and enjoy those different cultures. In  South Africa, she helped the people here as a volunteer, but she soon left this job because of the uncooperative and irresponsible local teachers, parents and the people here. These teachers went out of classes to relax when she and her team came to help, many of the parents who are incapable of feeding their children, left their infants in "baby recure" - a post which infants are put in and the citizen waited patently for aid as it was obvious. In the writer's point of view, domination causes poverty and strongly agrees that the developed countries should not aid for South Africa anymore. She explains that South Africa would die then, but he will stand on his feet to become a developing nation finally.