Discuss about euthanasia. Các anh chị chỉnh sửa, góp ý và chấm điểm giúp em ạ. Em cảm ơn.
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Euthanasia is a head-splitting issue. In some developed countries, it is legal. However, many countries oppose euthanasia which is considered immoral and inhumane. I, strongly agree with this idea due to following reasons.

Economically speaking, euthanasia save time and money for patients’ families. Let’s take cancer is a telling example. In the final stage, not only must the sick bear utmost attack but their relatives have to pay a huge amount of money for radiotherapy. As a result, there’re families collapsed because of medicinal purposes. Therefore, many people implore doctors for euthanasia as a way out. According to US news, there used to have hospital do euthanasia without any benefits to help patients be peaceful. Likewise, we can feed up medical funds to help another people. In terms of environment, enthanasisa reduces the overload in hospitals. It deciles medical waste as well. Hence, enthanasia decrease the pollution rate.

When it comes to psychological aspect, euthanasia provides a way to relive extreme pain and is an exit when a person’s quality of life is low. MC Quang Minh is a case in point. He suffered hepatitis which only expresses its signs in the final stage. This young MC lost his weight quickly and got extreme pains unmaginable. Having no chance to treat, his mother decided to choose an euthanasia for him. She doesn’t want her child must bear that extreme pains any more. Adherents think that people don’t have right to choose being born or not but they do have right to choose the way they die. Yet, dissidents claim that euthanasia not only devalues human life but also violates human rights. Except some developed conutries such as Ameriaca, France, Australia,… recognize this idea is legal, it is considered immoral and inhumane in another countries. There are people fight with disease each second to live, so, is euthanasia a way to give up the life easily?

To sum up, I’m in support of euthanasia. While this idea have not yet been recognized in many countries and is considered as a human killing way, it may help many people in special circumstanes.
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