writing task 2

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The life of the youth in the past and in the present                    I believe that the youth of the previous generation has many pressures and difficulties compared to the youth in present.                 In the previous generation, the fields such as economic, technology and social are slow development so people have met many problems. In the many families, economic condition is poor from eating to moving. They must worry about food product problem, health service... It was not as enough as today. The needs such as education, culture, entertainment… hasn’t enough. Formerly, the locations such as school, company, hospital… isn’t enough and convenient as is today. However, the moving also is very difficult. The means is very privative. The roads isn’t upgrade yet even the moving in learn active, going work and coming to school. These problems concentrate is always create pressure. The young people are main manpower. They must face to face with many new problem and challenge. This fact lead to stress level of this young people is relative high.                 On the other hand, the young of the present almost has got enough all things. Because they was good education. They come into from country. Economic, education and technology of the country more and more strongly develop bring about many fields also develop. Therefore the youth of the present have many chances to develop country as well as develop themselves.  The advent technology of the new generation had satisfy lead to practice anything also more easily.                 In short, clearing the life of the previous generation met many problems economic, social more than the youth of the present. Therefore, the level stress of the young people is big.

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