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The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

 The chart illustrates the number of users using three different airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000. This essay will discuss about the changes of travelers using the airport through the years.

 The LaGuardia airport had the biggest number of passengers through 5 years, started with 30 millions of people in 1995 to approximately 70 millions in 2000. Whilst the John F.Kenedy airport had unstable number of travelers, began with about 28 millions in 1995 and reached the peak in 1997 with 49 millions then went down uncontrollable. Although, they still gain their strength with 43 millions of passengers in 2000. Different with the two others airport, the Newark airport had a low start point with just 15 millions of people. But then growl up steady and get the peak at 1998 with 41 millions and remained stable with the same number until 2000.

  Overall, we could see that all three major airport got a huge result from where they began.( 163 words)

 

Answer 1

The chart illustrates the number of users traveller using three different airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000. This essay will discuss about the changes of travelers using the airport through the years.

Overall, over the period shown, the LaGuardia airport had the highest figures, incontrast, the number of traveller using Newark airport was lowest in all 3 airports. Morover, LaGuardia airport and Newark airport tended to increase significantly while there was unexpected in John F.Kenedy airport.

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 (The LaGuardia airport had the biggest number of passengers through 5 years, started with 30 millions of people in 1995 to approximately 70 millions in 2000. Whilst the John F.Kenedy airport had unstable number of travelers, began with about 28 millions in 1995 and reached the peak in 1997 with 49 millions then went down uncontrollable. Although, they still gain their strength with 43 millions of passengers in 2000. Different with the two others airport, the Newark airport had a low start point with just 15 millions of people. But then growl up steady and get the peak at 1998 with 41 millions and remained stable with the same number until 2000.)

  Overall, we could see that all three major airport got a huge result from where they began.( 163 words)

Answer 2

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The bar chart demonstrates the quantity of passengers travelling by airplane in three different popular airports in New York city from 1995 to 2000.Generally,over the given period of time,Laguardia witnessed a significant growth in visiting,dropping from 25 to approximately 70 millions of passengers,while John F.Kenedy’s fluctuated dramatically.

According to the graph, while the number of Laguardia’s visitors from 1995 to 1996 and the period 1998-2000 is the highest in total, there was a significant figure in John F.Kenedy’s passengers in 1997 (47 millions) which made this airport is the most popular destination of travelling.However, from 1998 to 2000, users of John F.Kenedy airport had a considerable fluctuation, which reached a bottom of 31 millions of passengers in 1999.

Turning to Newark airport’s visitors, from the first four years, it increased dramatically and ascended to reach a peak at 41 millions of passengers in 1998.However,the number of travellers remained steadily through the period from 1998 to 2000,while the visitor’s rate of Laguardia went up greatly which was about 50% more common in 2000 than in 1998

In conclusion, LaGuardia airport had the growth in passengers in six years, while John F.Kenedy one fluctuated and Newark one stabilized in visitors in the last three years ( from 1998 to 2000)

(205 words)