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Question

Topic: Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world with serious results for environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem.

Nowadays human often use product from wood. For example, paper bag , table, furniture….People fell trees in forest to produce that is reason make serious result for environment as climate change, global warming…..now I think we need some solution.

We need grow tree in empty soil. When logging industry happens, the mountain don’t have tree.It causes erosion, pollution…Environment will be damaged so Forest is important. Forest is destroyed by human activity  so we need create them.

We use product of wood within limit.In stead of using paper bag, we can use bag from recycled waste as product from bagasse.We can use paper bags many time when you go shopping or go market.Paper also make from wood so we must save it. We can use recycled paper for anything isn’t important or use computer.We must not waste paper when it have value.

Answer 1

Đây là dạng Task 2 mà, không phải Task 1.

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là bài writing task 1 tối ngày 23/5 em ms tập viết mong mọi người sửa lỗi dùm em ạ

Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?