Public transportation is a great way to travel , particulary within a metropolis. The metro is the mast convenient way to get around a city. Do you agree or disagree? (first time I write this task)

Question

These day, vehicle is of morden method travelling in urban area. Many public transportation in the city which people are using as train, bus and underground types. Metro is the gigantic condition to go in capital area. I completely agree with this idea and in this essay I will support my opinion with example.

On the on hand, many people argue that morden public transportation is great convenient using in a city. It is their view that metro is the best choice of us with fast and comfortable as a trip. Underground can bring us very quickly and safe to destination with a nice condition in a room and high perfect insurance for passengers. Service systems in metro bring high quality life with a friendly staffs, fresh foods and also ticket always s on time. As metro is none pollution environment and save money are very useful in the future.

On the other hand, there is an argument that underground is morden and expensive a lot with developing countries. They claim that high quality vehicle is so expensive with poor country. Moreover, if they bought a metro to use in a city, they would need to build a lot of construction for that one. Many developing countries cannot have good condition and money invest that one and railway system using metro as develop countries. In Vietnam, if the metro work in a city as Hanoi and HCM, we would have enough financial to invest underground system.

In conclusion, public transportation is very useful in a city with morden and high quality services. I think metro should be in a lot country is necessary in the future.

Answer 1

Bài của bạn có khá nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, cách dùng từ:

1. Introduction:

 These day=> Today/Nowadays

  morden=>modern

gigantic condition=>huge/enormous condition (gigantic thường được dùng chỉ kích thước).

2.Body:

Para 1: One the on hand=> One the one hand

              morden=>modern

              Service systems in metro bring=>Service systems in metro supply/provide/serve.

Para 2: morden=> luxurious( chỗ này k nên dùng modern)

             They claim.......is so expensive with poor country=> exceeds capabilities of  poor countries.( câu trước có expensive rồi, câu này k nên lặp lại)

              cannot have good condition and money invest=> cannot afford to invest.

3. Conclusion:

              morden=> modern

              country=>countries.

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