These day, there has been much concerned about how to develop countries, especially the developing countries. Some people say that if one country has a desire to develop fast, it is very necessary to improve their education immediately. Personally, I agree with this statement because of two main reasons.
These day, there has been much concerned about how to develop countries, especially the developing countries=> the developing ones (lỗi lặp từ).
Some people say that if one country (đổi thành nations: lỗi lặp từ) has a desire to develop fast, it is very necessary (for them) to improve their education immediately.
To begin with, students in educated environment can get the professional skills and knowledge. In order to do many task well, the important field is theory lessons (ngữ pháp chia động từ và danh từ không đồng nhất) that they can get in the educated environment by being lectured by professors or reading books. Besides, people who are educated always (lỗi sweeping, không nên khẳng định là always, nên giảm nhẹ là usually, are more likely to) have the right decisions to choose their job. If they love their job, they can do it well without any hard feeling. Undoubtedly, educated people can help their country developed in many fields like economic (xem loại loại từ), politic and culture.
Ngoài ra b sử dụng educated people hơi nhiều, b nên thay bằng intelectual people chẳng hạn.
Furthermore, educated people completely (sweeping, nên giảm nhẹ) have a good behavior. Obviously, people in educated environment are having many kind (subject verb agreement) of good characters like conscientious, autonomous, flexible, tolerant and cooperative. That is why they can get the efficient ways in their work and their personal relationship. A recent survey indicates that the percentages of crime in educated people is less than that of uneducated people. Therefore, educated environment can avoid social evil that always (cần giảm nhẹ) being concerned by people. Without crime or any other social evil, it is no doubt that (cần giảm nhẹ) countries will develop in the near future.
To sum up, education is exactly (cần giảm nhẹ) the first step towards a country’s development. It could be predict ( lỗi grammar) that in the future, many developing countries will improve their education in order to being the modern countries.