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Incarceration is one of the primary forms of punishment for the commission of felony. However, public opinions divided over whether or not criminals should be put under arrest. Individually, i firmly believe that it would be better if goverments provided offenders with education and vocational training. 


To begin with, putting criminals to prison could be guarantee safety for the society, this is because those people can not able to commit more crimes. However, sending offenders to the jail could bring many adverse impact. Firsly, the cost of running and managing prisons could be as costly as the national and local authorities need to invest much money on facilities and security of the whole society. Secondly, when criminals are forced to go to the jail, they have to lost their freedom and waste their time at the place they adverse to stay. As a result, those people have the propensity for resentful and they could lead to some dangerous behaviors for the citizens when they are come back to the society.


On top of that, it is factual that providing education and job training is the best method that can be used to help criminals become better citizens. Specifically, education could bring a deeper understanding of correct moral behavior for offenders. To put it simply, being educated, law-breaker could learn to distinguish between right and wrong manners and they would realise that it is unacceptable to break the law. Futhermore, vocational training plays a vital role in ensure that all criminals entering prison are given the chance to achieve a normal career after completing their sentences. Many people commit crimes due to their lack of money and become criminals such as burglars or robbers. Providing job training would help them accumulate many useful skills which make way for them to earn a living when reintegrate back into society and they would no longer have motivation to reoffend.


In conclusion, it is better to use education and job training to deal with offenders rather than putting them into prison. 

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Incarceration is one of the primary forms of punishment for the commission of felony. However, public opinions divided over -->  in whether or not criminals should be put under arrest. Individually, i firmly believe that it would be better if goverments -->  governments provided offenders with education and vocational training. 

To begin with, putting criminals to -->  into prison could be guarantee safety for the society, this is because those people can not able to commit more crimes. However, sending offenders to the jail could bring many adverse impacts. Firsly, -->  Firstly, the cost of running and managing prisons could be as costly as the national --> the budgets which governments and local authorities need to invest much money on facilities and security of the whole society. Secondly, when criminals are forced to go to the jail, they have to lost their freedom and waste their time at the place they adverse to stay. -->  they do not want to stay. As a result, those people have the propensity for resentful emotions and they could -->   which lead to some dangerous behaviors for the citizens -->  others citizens when they are come back to the society.

 

On top of that, it is factual that providing education and job training is -->  are the best methods that can be used to help criminals become better citizens. Specifically, education could bring a deeper understanding of correct moral behavior for offenders. To put it simply, being educated, law-breaker could learn to distinguish between right and wrong manners and they would realise -->  can realize that it is unacceptable to break the law. Futhermore, -->  Furthermore, vocational training plays a vital role in ensure that all criminals entering prison are given the chance to achieve a normal career after completing their sentences. Many people commit crimes due to their lack of money and become criminals such as burglars or robbers. Providing job training would help them accumulate many useful skills which make way for them to earn a living when reintegrate back into society and they would no longer have motivation to reoffend.


 

In conclusion, it is better to use education and job training to deal with offenders rather than putting them into prison. 

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