many poeople argue that arbortion should be illegal. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. [closed]

Question

Abortion is a very controversial issue throughout history's human. As the number of unexpected baby is increasing dramatically, this issue is discussed more regularly. Many people believe that abortion should be illegal. Personally, I partly disagree with that view and some reasons are outlined below.

First of all, women have the right to do whatever with their body. That is the right of human. The fetal is just a living thing. It's not a complete person yet. Moreover, women only have to abort their fetal in some curtain and special cases such as raping, incest or they are too young or too old to have a baby. The common feature of those cases is that it is the unexpectation. They are not ready to have a baby.

Secondly, if women abondon their fetal, in someway it brings benefits to her own and society. For instance, if they are in poverty, they do not afford to raise their child after giving birth which may causes them being in poverty deeper. Additionally, if a woman is too old or too young, they are not ready to have a baby biologically.

It is not deniable that abortion is something immoral. But in term of human right and economy, it should be allowed by legislation.

In conclusion, I want to reiterate that government should allow women to abort their fetal if they have good reasons.

Answer 1

Abortion is a very controversial issue throughout history's human. As the number of unexpected babies is increasing dramatically, this issue is discussed more regularly. Many people believe that abortion should be illegal (lỗi copy đề bài) . Personally, I partly disagree with that view for some reasons which are outlined below.

First of all, women have the right to do whatever with their body (lỗi informal) . That is the right of human (câu trước nhắc rồi ko nhắc lại, cho thành hẳn 1 câu đơn thế này) The fetal is just a living thing. It's not a complete person yet. Moreover, women only have to abort their fetal in some curtain and special cases such as raping, incest or they are too young or too old to have a baby (lỗi lặp từ baby, có thể thay bằng foetus hoặc infant) The common feature of those cases is that it is the unexpectation and they are not ready to have a baby.

Secondly, if women abondon their fetal, in someway it brings benefits to her and society. For instance, if they are in poverty, they can not afford to raise their child after giving birth, which may result in deeper poverty. Additionally, if a woman is too old or too young, they are not ready to have a baby biologically.

It is not deniable that abortion is something immoral (câu này mắc hai lỗi. 1 là khẳng định chắc chắn, ko đc dùng undeniable hay đại loại thế, 2 là informal "something immoral" . However, (but nối mệnh đề trong 1 câu. Chuyển sang câu mới dùng however) in term of human right and economy, it should be allowed but restricted by legislation. 

In conclusion, I am inclined to think that abortion should not be encouraged but it should be allowed in some certain cases.

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