Tuổi teen giúp ích gì cho xã hội hiện nay

Question

You ask us what have we done for society?  We replied that we do not know ourselves, because we are still trying to make "contributions" useful to society.  The young generation is a generation that has a lot of opportunities to be exposed to new knowledge and have good thinking wisdom.  Although he is the posterity, he is the leader of the future.  Talking about the contributions of successful young people are countless, with their creativity they create a lot of useful necessities for people and society.  Create machines that help people live and support the elderly in their daily activities.  As for those who are not outstanding, they still silently dedicate themselves to life in many different ways.  should remember that the contribution is not in the quantity but in the heart and effort of the devotee.  Young people "contribute" small things but one day it will become very big

Answer 1

Câu hỏi của bạn cho phần speaking đúng không?

"We replied that we do not know ourselves, because we are still trying to make "contributions" useful to society."

Sao bạn dùng từ "replied" thay vì "reply" nhỉ? Bên cạnh đó, từ "useful" có vẻ hơi dư thừa bạn nhỉ? Bạn sẽ thêm tính từ bổ trợ cho danh từ khi danh từ đó không thể hiện được điều đó. "Contribution" thì có vẻ luôn useful bạn nhỉ? Bạn sẽ có thể thêm các tính từ như "major, substantial, private,... hoặc bạn nói đơn giản contribution thôi được rồi.

Bạn có thể nói ngắn gọn để dàng cho bạn hơn như là:

You ask us what have we done for society? we do not know because we are still contributing to society.

"The young generation is a generation that has a lot of opportunities to be exposed to new knowledge and have good thinking wisdom."

Mình nghĩ bạn sẽ muốn nói như này:

"The young generation is one that has a lot of opportunities to be exposed to new knowledge and have good thinking wisdom."

Tương tư, bạn cũng có thể khiến nó dễ dàng hơn:

"The young generation has a lot of opportunities to get new knowledge and have good thinking wisdom."

Văn nói thì bạn nói như nào cũng được mà mình đề xuất cách cho bạn dễ hơn chứ không phải là tốt hơn nhé.

Thêm ví dụ cuối cùng nhé:

"Talking about the contributions of successful young people are countless, with their creativity they create a lot of useful necessities for people and society."

"Talking about the contributions of successful young people are countless" không make sense bạn ạ vì "countless" đang bổ nghĩa cho "talking about...". Mình nghĩa ý bạn là: 

"The contributions of successful young people are countless, with creativity they create -> make a lot of useful necessities for people and society." Bạn có thể đổi sang từ make cho đỡ nhàm chán nếu bạn muốn vì creativity với create nó cùng gốc từ.