MY FAMILY- sáng 1/6

Question

I would like to tell you about my loving family where everyone admires and respects one another. My parents have a very romantic story of the first meeting. We are a small family with 4 members: my parents, my younger sister, and me. My parents are the same age. My father is a farmer. He spends most of his time on the farm, that’s why he has tanned skin. My mother is a teacher. She is a great woman who has always taken very good care of my family. I have a sibling. She is a student at secondary school. She takes after her father. The family is the closest and the most loved people. The family where I have brought me up and I have grown up in my parent “ loving arms”. My family always gets along with together. Everyweek, we often get together with meals, then watch TV and chat with together. Whenever I go, I will always come back to my family. I know they are my loved ones.

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

The family is the closest and the most loved people. The family where I have brought me up and I have grown up in my parent “ loving arms” 

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"Chat with together" bạn nên đổi thành "chat" thôi nhé