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There is a contentious argument that outdoor recreations provide advantages for the young’s  growth than playing video games. While I agree that doing exercise is good for youngsters, I also believe that the development of junior individuals could be reflected in online games.

On the one hand, there are several reasons why outdoor activities are important for adolescents. Firstly, outdoor recreations help children build strong bones and physical strength. Doing exercise does not only offer protein  for individuals but also burn calories inside them. As a result, those who are more active outside are likely to stay fit. Besides, playing outside may enhance mental health. In fact, outdoor activities help people  alleviate stress because they could communicate with others, so that they can share anything in their lives .

On the other hand, it is wrong to reject the argument in favor of playing computer games. The first reason is that playing games in their leisure time can help children improve manual dexterity. A transferable skill such as communication, leadership and teamwork supports children to excel in future careers. In addition, video games can inspire the young to be more persistent. With the game that either win or lose, individuals could learn from the mistakes and keep trying to achieve attainments in computer games. Therefore, online games teach children to be more confident to deal with difficulties in reality.

 In conclusion, it is ludicrous to compare outdoor recreation with computer games because they are equally important.

 

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There is a contentious argument that outdoor recreations provide more advantages for the young’s  growth than playing video games. While I agree that doing exercise is good for youngsters, I also believe that the development of junior individuals could be reflected in online games.

On the one hand, there are several reasons why outdoor activities are important for adolescents. Firstly, outdoor recreations help children build strong bones and physical strength. Doing exercise does not only offer protein for individuals but also burn calories inside them. As a result, those who are more active outside are likely to stay healthy and fit. Besides, playing outside may also enhance mental health. In fact, outdoor activities help people  alleviate stress after long period of working and studying. While joining outdoor sports, they can indulge in them to contemporarily forget about the problems and because they could communicate with others, so that they can share anything in their lives .

On the other hand, it is wrong to reject the argument in favor of playing computer games. The first reason is that playing games in their leisure time can help children improve manual dexterity. A transferable skill such as communication, leadership and teamwork supports children to excel in future careers. In addition, video games can inspire the young to be more persistent. With the game that either win or lose, individuals could learn from the mistakes and keep trying to achieve attainments in computer games. Therefore, online games teach children to be more confident to deal with difficulties in reality.

 In conclusion, it is ludicrous (không nên dùng những từ thế này trong bài luận nhé) to compare outdoor recreation with computer games because they are equally important. may have equally important impacts on children.

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