Bài Ielts Task 2 - lấy trong đề Cambridge Test 7 - Fixed Punishment
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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. 
 
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
 
 
A group of people affirm that all types of crime should be punished based on a standard set of rules while some other protestors claim that certain penalty should be selected depending on discrepancies among crime cases. In this essay, I will analyse both these perceptions to argue that each crime's background should be carefully examined before deciding on what type of penalty is most appropriate.
 
On the one hand, there is an advantage of setting a clear level of punishment for each kind of crime. For example, some one must be sent to jail if they commit robbery or even be sentenced to death in case of killing innocent people. Obviously, this clear set of regulation is indeed very useful in terms of reducing crime rate in the society as the whole nation is all aware of the severe punishments they may have if daring to undertake inhumane and unlawful behaviors.
Nonetheless, merely applying fixed types of penalty to every crime case is unfair for the offender in certain situations. Specifically, analysis on each crime's intentionality as well as the convict's behavior must be carefully carried out to see the severity of each case before final decision is made. For instance, a serial murderer must be treated more seriously than a woman who unintentionally kills the rapist as a way of self defense.
 
In conclusion, although application of fixed punishment is quite important since it is used as a warning for anyone who pretend to commit crime, careful examination of each crime scene must always be taken into account case by case to decide on the most appropriate and fairest penalty for the criminal. Otherwise, it may raise a very high level of criticism from the community toward unfair treatment in government's law. 
 
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