The chart below shows male and female fitness membership between 1970 and 2000.

Question

The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female fitness members in the period of 30 years, from 1970 to 2000.

Overall, while the figure for women witnessed an upward trend, the reverse was true for that of men. Additionally, the output of women experienced such remarkable fluctuations.

Starting in 1970, over 2000 men attended the fitness center, which was much higher compared to the number of women ( only 1000). Over the next 5 years, the figures for both genders increased sharply. Specifically, the amount of women was 2000, but only account for a half of men's. However,from 1975 to 1980,  the figures for both men and women fell off, to around 2500 and 1800 respectively.
In the period between 1800 and 1985, the outcome of men continued decreasing before surging over the next 10 years and reaching the peak at 5000 in 1995. Yet, followed by notable plummet of 4000 members in 2000. Meanwhile, the data of female members continuously flactuated under 3000 and ended up with 2000, twice as many as that of men.

Answer 1

The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female fitness members in a period of 30 years, from 1970 to 2000.

Overall, while the figure for women witnessed an upward trend, the reverse was true for that of men. Additionally, the output of women experienced such remarkable fluctuations.

Starting in 1970, over 2000 men attended the fitness center, which was much higher compared to the number of women ( only 1000). Over the next 5 years, the figures for both genders increased sharply. Specifically, the number of women was 2000 but only account for half of the men. However, from 1975 to 1980, the figures for both men and women fell off, to around 2500 and 1800 respectively. 

In the period between 1800 and 1985, the outcome of men continued decreasing before surging over the next 10 years and reaching a peak of 5000 in 1995. Yet, followed by a notable surge of 4000 members in 2000. Meanwhile, the data of female members continuously fluctuated under 3000 and ended up with 2000, twice times as many as that of men.

Answer 2

The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female fitness members -> membership( không thay thế được hai từ này với nhau)

the amount of women was 2000, but only account for a half of men  -> the number of men( xác định cái gì của men)

Bài viết đạt được tầm 6.5

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Membership là số hội viên thì thay bằng the number of members được chứ ạ???