advantages and disadvantages of lived in a large family ( in the past ).

Question

Family life in the past was so much different than now. Cause in the present, there are 4-6 members in the family, but there were so much more in the past in some case. And then, it also gave to us some advantages and disadvantages when we live in a large family.

In my personaly thinking, there were three main benefits. First, you were never alone and not have any lonely feeling. You had alot of people to share your daily life, sth that you could not share to your friends. Second, when you lived in a house that have close people, you could get help from them to deal with sth you were stuck in. Also, the parents could help others to look after their children when they were not at home. Last but not least, you could very different skills from your family's members. And it might be benefit hwen you were in some difficult case.

However, many drawbacks appeared. First of all, you were not have private space. It was very uncomfortable if we not have free sapce to relax after a long studying or working day. Next, it was very easy to have a small fight with others when you live in a multi-generational home. Different ages, different thinking, different experient , all off that was enough for a small fight.

In my opinion, disadvantages of large family were greatter than advantages, although the quantity that I listed is opposite. There were many people surround you, help you when you need , take care you . Anyway, you could not your own space, you could not expriment with your life, could not control it , not be responsible with your decision , always depend on some one . You could not grow up .

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