Task 1 - International Graduates in Canada

Question

   https://www.google.com/search?q=ielts+writing+international+graduates&rlz=1C1NHXL_viVN765VN765&sxsrf=ALeKk02ttNCRM9S6PCtDYd1lTOtDdUAbWg:1586134513091&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwip2N_By9LoAhWL62EKHQ48C70Q_AUoAnoECAwQBA&biw=1707&bih=821#imgrc=2Bm4CAFhjKPs0M

 The graph illustrates percentages changes in the number of international graduates in different regions of Canada from 2001 to 2006. Overall, numbers of graduates in most of the regions increased, except for Alberta.

 In 2001, Ontario, Newfoundland & Labrador and Manitoba were the regions with the lowest percentages, with 3.1% , 3.7% and 3.8%, respectively. However, by 2006, they’ve nearly doubled their rates: Ontario ended with 6% while the other two both had around 7%.

 The next two regions higher in percentages in 2001 were: British Columbia and Alberta. In 2006, while British Columbia witnessed a rocket rise in their rate, as it increased by around 2.19 times, Alberta leveled off as their rate went from 5.8% down to 4.4%.

 Top 3 provinces with the highest proportions of international graduates in the beginning were New Brunswick(7%), Nova Scotia(6.5%) and Quebec(6.1%), ranked as listed. In 2006, their rates all rose, to end the survey with 11.7%, 10.5% and 8.5%, with their ranks stayed the same.

 In contrast, eventhough New Brunswick maintained the first place, their rate of increasing - 1.67 time, wasn’t as impressive as New Columbia’s, with around 2.19%.

Answer 1

The graph illustrates percentages changes in the number percentage of international graduates in different regions of Canada from 2001 to 2006. Overall, numbers proportions of graduates in most of the regions increased, except for Alberta.

 In 2001, Ontario, Newfoundland & Labrador and Manitoba were the regions with which had the lowest percentages, with 3.1% , 3.7% and 3.8%, respectively. However, by 2006, they’ve nearly doubled their rates: Ontario ended with 6% while the other two both had around 7%.

 The next two regions which were higher in percentages in 2001 were: British Columbia and Alberta. In 2006, while British Columbia witnessed a rocket rise in their rate, as it increased by around 2.19 times, Alberta leveled off as their rate went down from 5.8% down to 4.4%.

 Top 3 provinces with which had the highest proportions of international graduates in the beginning were New Brunswick(7%), Nova Scotia(6.5%) and Quebec(6.1%), ranked as listed. In 2006, their rates all rose, to end the survey with 11.7%, 10.5% and 8.5%, with their ranks being stayed the same.

 In contrast, eventhough New Brunswick maintained the first place, their rate of increasing (their increasing rate) (1.67 times), wasn’t was not as impressive as New Columbia’s, with around 2.19%.

 

Comments

Really thank you for your reply, Appreciate^^

Just to note, in some places in the essay above, i removed some redundant words or phrases to keep the word count under 200

Tysm!!^^