Bài ielts task 2- luyện viết

Question

            The media should be allowed to publish information about the private lives of famous people. What are your views?

         We are live in an ear technology,  so the development of media were affected to human life, especially celebrites. The media always publish information about the private lives of famous people. In my opinion, I disagree with that.

          First of all, I think each person has private life that they want to shield with others, because nobody is perfect. Everybody has bad habits and flaws, therefore the media have not to right to report on their private life. It does not expose everything  what celebrities do, say, wear,drink and eat... Sometimes, it can demeaning to famous people. That action must be condemned.

          In addition, I suppose the media should put on information which are about information economic, political, cultural, sport and soft skills... This information will be more useful for audience than information about the private lives of famous people. The information about the privacy of celebities will not help us but also it take a lot of time.

          However, the famous of a person depend on media. Because of the media that people can know about them and their name popular in society. Nowdays, some celebrites have trend exposure everything on the media to attract attention.

          In conclusion, the media is very intersting but it should not report about private life of famous people since its is right to of people. Media should not look for about private live of others that can destroy live and job of them. Futhermore, famous people need to conscious of their right to privacy. 

Answer 1

 We are live in an ear technology,  so the development of media were affected to human life, especially celebrites. The media always publish information about the private lives of famous people. In my opinion, I disagree with that.

 We are live in an ear technology,  so the development of media were affected to human life, especially celebrites. The media always publish information about the private lives of famous people. In my opinion, I disagree with that.

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