Đề IELTS Task 2 ngày 14/12/19 Children Education

Question

Task 2: Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views give opinions

It is true that people have different views on whether to give their children sooner education at school or not.  Although it can be argued that it would be better if the children start later than seven years old, I believe that it should be best if the kids can get formal education at their young age. 

There are many reasons why people want their kids to go to school after they’re seven. Children at a young age are meant to be playful and gently discover the world around them with their parents before getting into a really strict and sometimes stressful environment like school. Giving parents time to educate their children about other qualities such as kindness, humbleness, responsibility, compassion, etc.. before they attend school is also an important feature. 

On the other hand, I believe that sending your children to school at an early age is a better option. Firstly, at a young age, children are more likely to learn and develop their skills faster and more efficiently. Moreover, the school will train the children to be disciplined, open opportunities for the kids to interact with those kids at the same age in many school activities.  Secondly, to pursue an early education will give your children have better chances in their career later in their life. Many parents invest. It would be a disadvantage for those children that not be able to receive proper education in their early age. 

For the reason mentioned above, I do believe it’s the best option for the children’s sake that they should start to attend school as soon as possible. 

 

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People indeed have different views on whether to give their children sooner education at school or not.  Although it can be argued that it would be better if the children start later than seven years old, I believe that it should be best if the kids can get formal education at their young age. 

There are many reasons why people want their kids to go to school after they’re seven. Children at a young age are meant to be playful and gently discover the world around them with their parents before getting into a really strict and sometimes stressful environment like school. Giving parents time to educate their children about other qualities such as kindness, humbleness, responsibility, compassion, etc.. before they attend school is also an important feature. 

On the other hand, I believe that sending your children to school at an early age is a better option. Firstly, at a young age, children are more likely to learn and develop their skills faster and more efficiently. Moreover, the school will train the children to be disciplined, open opportunities for the kids to interact with those kids at the same age in many school activities.  Secondly, to pursue an early education will give your children have better chances in their career later in their life. Many parents invest. It would be a disadvantage for those children that not be able to receive proper education in their early age. 

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For the reason mentioned above, I do believe it’s the best option for the children’s sake that they should start to attend school as soon as possible.