Children should always follow their parents' advice . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement .

Question

Some people argue that advice from parents always good for thier childrens , so childrens shoul abey advice of them . However , i do not agree with this statement . Personally  , i think  that childs shold be allowed to do all the thinhs which are not in danger .

     on the one hand , children's awareness are not completely developed ,that mean they do not kown what is wrong or correct . therefore , advices from their parents are necessary for them . in pact , advices from older people in family phay a significant rule in shaping the character of children in the future . in addition , children abeys there parents that is an action of respect to older people . for instance , the awarenesses  of japaness is very discipline and respectable , these might be the result of the parents' teaching at an aerly age .

    Howevre , i disagree with the statement that the child have to follow all the things their parents saying . there are shold have the liberal atmosphere  for creation of children  . in other words , each children have a different brainpower anh they also are dissimilar  with their parents . That is why they should have different  atmospheres and they should be allowed  do anything that they want to . this is the best ways for the developing of them . futhermore , nobody could replace them deciding about their hobbies  , their major and their dream job which affects their life in the future .

    in conclusion  , advices from parents are good , but they should not impose their children following  all the things that they think it good for their childens , and a freedom environment is required  to develop themself .

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Some people argue that advice from parents always good for their children, so children should obey advice about them. However, I do not agree with this statement. I think that children should be allowed to do all the things which are not in danger.

     On the one hand, children's awareness is not completely developed, which means they do not know what is wrong or correct. therefore, pieces of advice from their parents are necessary for them . in the pact, advice from older people in the family plays a significant rule in shaping the character of children in the future. besides, children abbeys their parents that is an act of respect for older people . for instance, the awareness of the Japanese is very discipline and respectable, these might be the result of the parents' teaching at an early age.

    However, I disagree with the statement that the child has to follow all the things their parents saying . there are should have a liberal atmosphere for the creation of children . in other words, each child has a different brainpower and they also are dissimilar with their parents. That is why they should have different atmospheres and they should be allowed to do anything that they want to . this is the best way for the development of them . furthermore , nobody could replace them deciding about their hobbies , their major and their dream job which affects their life in the future.

    in conclusion, advice from parents are good, but they should not impose their children following all the things that they think is good for their children, and a free environment is required to develop themself.

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