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Organized tour to remote areas and community is increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and the environment?

Regarding the truth that package tours to unpopular places like mountainous areas and outskirts are supported by people, I consider it to have upsides and downsides to some extent/

It seems to me that residents in an area will get numerous benefits from tours. In order to meet travelers ‘demand for staying places, food and other services, they can initiate business such as opening restaurants, food stands, motels, hostel and B&B. Hence, they will learn a lot of money from those places if the qualities are perfect. Another good point which is worth noticing is that local students and even people who need to practice speaking languages can take advantage of these tours to communicate with foreigners. This is the most inexpensive and quickest way to improve their speaking ability, since they do not have to pay for any online course or club at all. For instance, a student can use his English to show the directions to a shop for a Canadian or volunteer to be a tour guide. Thereby, his English will gradually be developed.

Though my view above show that tours are advantageous, I claim that they are harmful to the environment. People have to build more skyscrapers, museums, shopping malls, theaters and supermarkets, so that a region can keep attractive beauty and reputation. Consequently, this contributes to air pollution and even global warming which has been a serious problem to the world. Furthermore, there is a possibility that some tourists throw trash and unwanted stuffs to seas, lakes and ground which also results in water and soil pollution. More importantly, animals are likely to be extinct as their habitats are now for buildings’ constructions. Therefore, they will disappear one day and deforestation will be worse.

In brief, traveling campaigns help citizens to have satisfaction in life by earning more money from services. However, I recognize some minus points which are the cause for natural disasters. 

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Organized tour to remote areas and community is increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and the environment?

Regarding the truth that package tours to unpopular places like mountainous areas and outskirts are supported by people, I consider it to have upsides and downsides to some extent/

It seems to me that residents in an area will get numerous benefits from tours. In order to meet travelers ‘demand for staying places, food, and other services, they can initiate business such as opening restaurants, food stands, motels, hostel, and B&B. Hence, they will learn a lot of money from those places if the qualities are perfect. Another good point which is worth noticing is that local students and even people who need to practice speaking languages can take advantage of these tours to communicate with foreigners. This is the most inexpensive and quickest way to improve their speaking ability since they do not have to pay for any online course or club at all. For instance, a student can use his English to show the directions to a shop for a Canadian or volunteer to be a tour guide. Thereby, his English will gradually be developed.

Though my view above shows that tours are advantageous, I claim that they are harmful to the environment. People have to build more skyscrapers, museums, shopping malls, theaters and supermarkets, so that a region can keep attractive beauty and reputation. Consequently, this contributes to air pollution and even global warming which has been a serious problem to the world. Furthermore, there is a possibility that some tourists throw trash and unwanted stuffs to seas, lakes and ground which also results in water and soil pollution. More importantly, animals are likely to be extinct as their habitats are now for buildings’ constructions. Therefore, they will disappear one day and deforestation will be worse.

In brief, traveling campaigns help citizens to have satisfaction in life by earning more money from services. However, I recognize some minus points which are the cause of natural disasters.

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