Đề thi IELTS Writing ngày 11/1/2020 - Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree? [closed]

Question

Nowadays many people believed that oral communication is more effective than written communication. In my opinion, I partly agree with this idea. I believed that both spoken and written communication have their own benefit.
Firstly, on some situations which require body language and facial expressiones  oral communication has some advantages. Speaking face to face makes people become close-nit with each other because it can show a lot of emotions and people can express their feelings. For example, when people watch a comedy, they can laugh out loud or when people have a date, they can show their emotions with their partner. As the result people can understand each other better.
In contrast, written communication also has advantages on some situations. In law, speech do not have power and all decide must have a text document.  Moreover, in business when people need discuss some problems with partners, a written communication will provide enough information and clearer than spoken communication. It is more convenient and quicker and also helps people save time to trave l to meet partner on some unnecessary situations.
In conclusion as I mentioned above I think that the advantages of spoken and written communication depend on specific situation.

Answer 1

I think your essay is pretty good but I think it will be perfect if you did not make these mistakes:

close-KNIT

As the result,

IN some situations

all DECISIONS

WRITTEN COMMUNICATION not A WRITTEN

A PARTNER

situationS

*well done. I hope you will be better next time.

Comments

Thank you so much

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believe không cần "d"

dùng các synonyms thay thế cho people, tránh lặp từ

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