Today more and more people are using mobile phone and computer. Thus, the communication ability is losing. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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It is argued that nowadays a large number of mobile phones and computer user who are losing ability to communicate face to face. While i accept that opinion , i believe that the former could be beneficial to some extent.

On the one hand, some people believe that nothing can replace face to face communication because in reality it makes you more dynamic and more confident and also help you to practice your behaviour and your ability to expression. For example , if you decided you going to marry a girl or not , you have to meet her first. In other words, face to face communication took a very special place in our life. It present  a sense of community comes with the ability to interact and socialize. This sets the foundation for trust, and ultimately creates a better working relationship.

On the other hand, nowadays technology is very major on works and many others. Technology helps us to communicate no matter where we are , it has a major part not only in our work but also in our life. For example, you can talk to your family even you are far from them, you can finish your homework and send it to your teacher even you do not met them, you can do all those things with few clicks. 

In conclusion, social communication is very crucial in reality life, it can not be replace by technology, however technology communication also has a large number of benefits.

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It is argued that nowadays a large number of mobile phones and computer users who are losing ability to communicate face to face (  face to face communication skills) vế  này của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh, mình chưa tìm thấy vị ngữ nha.

ability to expression. : ability to do something ..... ( expression theo mnih2 là n rồi )  .

 if you decided you going to marry a girl or not : decided  to marry....., với lại or là liên từ, bạn không nên dùng or not.... Minh khuyên bạn nên dùng whether...or not, 

 It presents  a sense ( dùng the hay vì a ) of community comes with the ability to interact and socialize.

 

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