In this modernization and industrialization society which demands higher qualifications and careers resulting from attending universities first. (câu ni mình ko hiểu)Therefore, to compete for them, students have to study hard on (mình nghĩ phả là by)themselves by paying more attention to all subjects relating (related) to the field they want to get qualifications in (bỏ )after leaving universities. In my opinion, it is perfectly (bỏ) essential for the high school to allow students to study the courses they want to study.
Naturally, each people have (everyone has))their own abilities for (of ) following some certain subjects they really can keep pace with or even good at(bỏ). That is the reason why there has been a lot of different subject combinations existing in all of universities for student s to fight for when they want to chase a faculty at a university(KO hiểu). So(THerefore), we can’t deny the important role of encouraging students to concentrate on some core subjects knowledge applied to the entrance exam tests. However, almost high schools force students to join every subject even they don’t make any sense(mình nghĩ cái này chỉ dùng để nói ) in supplying students with knowledge at all. Due to them(From that reason), students certainly must waste a lot of time learning by heart all of the theories that would be present in their tests related to those unnecessary subjects or the subjects you ()đừng dùng you trong academic writing) actually don’t like or can’t afford to keep on. Therefore, the time they invest in cultivating their mind from these main subjects is lessened significantly. If you really want to study something, it will turn into motivation to help you better at it.
However, study(ing))what subjects you want doesn’t mean you don’t need to skip some basic subjects like literature, math and English(ko hiểu cả câu). It may sound meaningless to some students when they are still on seat(bỏ) at high school but in the future, for a moment, you will regret not taking it more seriously. The reason why I say so is that they(làm rõ từ này) are all basic skills you must be equipped for any jobs without doubt in your future. Thus, besides spending time on your core subjects, do live up to lots of necessary knowledge for these basic ones.
In conclusion, I completely agree with the idea that high school should allow students to study the course they want to do which create an ideal space for them as well as the country to develop perfectly.
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