IELTS writing task 1, changes to road access to a city hospital

Question

 

The two images depict changes that have been made to a city hospital in two different years, 2007 and 2010

Overall, it is clear that the hospital has witnessed dramatic adjustment over the 3 year period with the introduction of a new bus station as well as the expansion in staff and public car park

The most noticeable modification was the redevelopment of parking lot to the south-east of the city hospital. It has now been allocated specifically for staff to park their car while opening up another car park for public in the Eastern part. Roughly 6 bus stops also got removed to make room for the addition of a recently built bus station to the South-west of City Hospital, allowing transportation to access Hospital road easier.

Apart from those enormous changes, two new roundabouts were at the same time introduced at the intersection of City Road and Hospital Road and at the crossing of Hospital Road and Ring Road.

 

 

 

Answer 1

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