The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Question

The two maps illustrate the way people accessed a city hospital in two different years,2017 and 2010.

It is clear that there are significant changes in facilities. The main striking makeover gets involved in the intersection upgrades while six bus stop moves to make way for the bus station.

From 2007 to 2010, the two new roundabouts were constructed. The first one was located at the three-way junction of hospital road and ring road cover around the city hospital when the second was situated at the four-way intersection of city road and hospital road.

Looking at other features, we can see that six bus stop located along hospital road were upgraded to a bus station on the west side. In term of car park, a new public parking lot was built on the east side of city hospital and people can access this cả park via the ring road, while the old parking space is  used for staff-only.

Answer 1

you wrote your W1 pretty well. But you should pay more attention to some mistakes.

2017 and 2010. -> 2007 and 2010

It is clear that there are significant changes in facilities -> It is clear that there were significant changes in facilities

The main striking makeover gets involved in -> The main striking makeover got involved in

six bus stop -> six bus stops

while six bus stop moves to make way for the bus station -> while six bus stops were removed to make way for the bus station / while six bus stop were replaced by the bus station

ring road cover around the city hospital -> ring road covered around the city hospital

when the second was situated at the -> while/whereas/... the second was situated at the

In term of car park, -> In terms of car park,

 the east side of city hospital ->  the east side of the city hospital 

this cả park -> this car park